Yeah...
You actually have some pretty good lyrics at times but the only problem is that you're rushing some of the bars. If it means cutting down some rhymes so it sounds smoother, you should do it. Just work on making your bars smoother instead of rushed. iight my n***a, stay up.
thank you. ill work on that
Loved the overall vibe like the guy below me said
I loved that hook and that background voice echoin' and singing some words. The funny thing I noticed is that you have that Lil' Wayne flow (Merc), but that's not a bad thing as long as you keep your lyrics real. Ya n***as doing good, stay up.
thx man appreciate to review man yeah i got more of a underground style but when it comes to mainstream beats i get that weezy thing alot man stay bro
You know what?
This is much better than the first in my opinion. I don't produce beats but I write to them, even so I can hear well. Listen, those drums don't sounds weird at all because it hypes the beat more and you come a LOT harder this time around with this beat. When I heard the first one I loved the violin on there but since I've already heard that in the first, you came out swinging on this remastered version, like you in REAL hard with them drums.
Keep doing you kid, stay up.
haha thanks a lot man. It's good to have someone on my side about the drums hahaha.
This sounded familiar for some reason...
Your boy sounded like M(Eminem)...I heard his flow and everything and at times he sounded very similar lol, but you killed it on here...you just have that MG flow, you pretty much attack every song lol Stay up my n***a.
He does have a sound to his voice similar to Em (funny, because he talks almost exactly the same as he raps). I try not to attack every song, mostly because I don't want to come off too aggressive, however if the topic warrants it lol I'm all over it! Appreciated fam.
Why are you here?...
lmao honestly, this shit is fucking RIDICULOUS. The best lyrics I've heard anywhere put together...this was just sick and you went on for like 5 minutes so I give you props for that. That was real hip hop at it's best...keep it up my n***a.
I'm here because nobody wants to give a great artist like myself a shot at the industry. I'm not "club" enough for certain A&R who only want the next big hype. I appreciate the props, and this is how I usually write when I do write a track. I'm just starting to get it all recorded, so there's more on the way! Matter of fact, I'm about to upload one now (a verse).
Well...
If you're trying to sound mainstream...congrats, but otherwise this is just the same old stuff you can hear on the radio. It does sound like some Jay-Z stuff, but it's just not my taste. Flow is alright, beat is ok as well, overall it was ok.
Real Music...Real Talk
This is a perfect way to send a message to people that talk shit about other genres of music. Honestly I love what you guys did here, it is something different and something that influences other genres.
You guys crossed some rock/metal or whatever with hip-hop and this is real music, that's the straight up truth because just because you don't like a certain type of genre, it doesn't mean it's bad music. With this song, you guys just crossed that boundary, very good. Keep your head up, later.
Yo...
I like the hook and the beat to this song, but please don't make anymore meaningless songs, kill the beef. Just drop it and start making some songs that doesn't involve dissing somebody, seriously. Let it go and make something that people can bump their heads to, I mean you're very talented when it comes to a chorus or hook. Stay up my n***a, real talk.
My n***a...
At first I knew your lyrics were good here, but n***a you just reclaimed any chance for someone else to beat your lyrics. I'm sorry but you were on point with the beat and flow. Your weak point used to be your flow, but this one just murdered that fact.
N***a you got my respect, no doubt. Be aware of me and my boy, we're gonna start releasing some shit for NG just to get some feedback. Our lyrics are better than most out here, but nothing beats this. Seriously, you got the passion for this, just do you. Keep your head up and be safe, I'm gonna keep my eye on you. If anything me and my boy will ask you to do something with us if you don't mind. iight, take care.
Thumbs up. I used to be all reckless and shit cuz I'm impatient when it comes to recording, but lately I've actually been taking my time to perfect it. I'll keep my eye for you my nig. Good looks on the review.
Sick...
Ya'll killed it, I don't care what anyone says about the spanish and english rapping. Listen if Hispanics can rap in English then it can happen vice-versa. I give you props the spanish in the beginning, seeing as I'm hispanic myself but everything else was nice lyrically. The flow could have been better for the 3rd verse but I'm not complaining, all in all it was a very good song.
Better than the other stuff people put up, I think battles and beef is pointless. That stuff is selfish, instead of helping hip hop people want to help themselves. Music without passion is not music at all. That's real talk.
thx bro much respect for your review thx again it means alot that you took the time to listen to the track stay brotha
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