HeLLsGaUrDiAn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[ f ] End of the Path]

Wow...

This is what I'm talking about man, I'm loving this song man and the title fits so well. This is the unique "Flashmac" style beat I was talking about and it's shining with all it's brightness and perfection. Melody is AMAZING my n***a lol this is so good man. Stay up. 5'd for the support and skill ;) lmao

flashmac responds:

haha thanks a lot man. Your reviews are the shit lol

[Drops of Ink]

Deep...

This is what you call ventin' lmao. Yeah my n***a, I'm feeling this everything was on point and the message is amazing. The chorus was tight and the verse were even better man, this is my style of hip hop and the beat was chosen well for this type of song. Stay up my n***a, 5'd.

[Metamorphasis]

Nice...

You were on point with your flow this time, this is very well done and it came out good and the vocabulary is much better, but I do think the laugh is overdone. If it is a signature then you have to make it sound hot man, honestly it just doesn't blend well. Either way, you have to know when to use those signatures because it shouldn't be done in every song, especially the songs that are deep.

Another thing though is that you should work on wordplay a little more, like maybe multi-syllable rhymes and also having multiple ryhmes in one bar. Other then that you stepped up man, I'm feeling this song. 5'd like always, stay up my n***a.

OBIEakaAO responds:

Good looks, advice taken. i simplified the rhyme just to amplify the message

[[ f ] Watch Your Back]

jp's hatin'...

lmao hell yeah, this is really an in your face type of beat that is only your style man, this shit is tight. I like this man, this beat has something in it that is just your style lol I don't know how else to describe it. jp down there is hatin' though lol my little n***a right here probably gonna be have that papi chulo status once he gets in the 20's son lol. You know I'll always "Watch Your Back" ;)

Just remember though, stay humble with everything in life and stay up.

flashmac responds:

haha. Hell ya man, jp was hatin lol. Failed attempt? wtf? haha anyway, glad you liked this track man. I'll be sure to stay humble. If there's one thing I cannot stand it's cocky people. Thanks for the review dude

[[ f ] Mayhem]

Just a tad overdone...

Not sure what it is but I just get the feeling that maybe you tried a little too hard or you tried making new sounds too hard. Something about the beat just doesn't feel right, honestly it does sound different but I don't think it really worked well. I think simple sometimes is really the best way to go, don't stray away from your style man. I think when you had that Higher Up beat, that was your unique style in full blast and Ice Cavern as well. Those had some unique melodies and some hot drums and snares and whatever you call it lol

Damn I wish I made beats to give you some more detailed tips but I don't so I'm fucked, but remember I still love your work but just don't get too far from what you already accomplished. Still 5 in my books, stay up.

flashmac responds:

It sounds pretty simple to me. Well at least the verse. I can see where your going with this, the chorus is kinda crowded, but I really don't think it's that it's that overdone. Anyway, thanks for the review man. It's good to hear from you.

[my outlook on death]

Deep my n***a...

I can't really understand what you feel right now, I did lose 2 people close to me but not my parents. It'll happen one day but for now, I just hope you get past it and start moving on, remember the good memories he left behind. Stay up my n***a.

[Sweat On Me]

Chorus is fire...

That chorus was really good, I don't think I would have thought of that. Your flow is so much smoother since the other times man. The chorus had me bobbing my head. The lyrics though are still kind of random, like try to concentrate on one topic. Like it's all over the place, most of your lyrics tend to stray away from any message, like there are so many ways to say something.

If you pick a topic, you can say something within a metaphor, it's hard to explain but you've heard me and my boy's song, we always stayed on topic with our lyrics. Try that for your next song but this is another step in the right direction, oh and your voice still needs to be toned down at parts. You sound like you're emphasizing every word, so try to emphasize only certain words or syllables. I hope you get what I mean, either way stay up my n***a. 5'd like always.

YoinK responds:

thanks, I really appreciate your suggestions.

[[ f ] Breaking the Silence]

Musical Block...

With this beat I can pretty much tell you did have a block, don't get me wrong this beat is still fire I did like it, I just think you could have came out harder with this. I do notice that you are developing something unique with your beats, it's something within your drums and melodies and it just calls my attention. Keep it up man, stay up my n***a. Oh yeah and 5'd as always ;) gotta support the good artists here ;)

flashmac responds:

Your reviews are alway great man. This man speaks the truth! lol, yeah I could've gone a bit harder but I made this rather quick and couldn't think of anything else to add lol. Thanks for the review.

[Superstar Status]

I'm feeling this...

iight there we go, this song right here shows just how versatile you can be. You show how you can easily come out with that different flow on this type of beat, and I respect that. Topic is not my taste to be honest but I just like something different for a change and this is a great example of that. N***as is sleeping on you lol, this song is something just to have fun with, I like it. 5'd like always, stay up my n***a.