You already know
This track is crazy good. I've always been attracted to your poetic flow, it's something so unique that I don't here often. I'm always paying attention to lyrics and you're probably the best punchline rapper I've heard so far. Even though your lyrics are simple, the message backs it up ten-fold so it's not a problem, besides when it's a song like this, I'd rather here simple lyrics with a strong message rather then something complicated. This gets my 5 and dl. Stay up.
To be first and foremost, I definitely appreciate the quality of the review, the 5 and the download.
Next up.
I also like the significance of 'punchline rapper'. Because that's exactly what I'm aiming for. I try to make everything sting. I have a Lil Wayne approach, just without Wayne. I try to be as direct as possible to everyone. You know industry flows have to be dumbed down for the 'rest of the world'.
I'm so glad someone agrees with me.
You feel that songs you can't understand and songs that only have a few lines that really hit you, just aren't up to par with songs you can truly relate to each line. That's why I do this kind of stuff. Because honestly, my tracks are all heart.
And if I want to communicate my emotions to the world, I need to tell the whole story from front to back or at least in very good detail, without confusing people.
Theres nothing worse than listening to a song with an amazing chorus/meaning but the song is so 'slurred' or 'undefined'. All you hear is choice words and a few assembled lines and some crazy multi's and words you don't understand.
I appreciate the love.
There is no such thing as a hater, and you are a true fan.
You are the reason I make music.
Thank you.
(I'm returning the favor as I finish this review)
(Still deciding a track to review and 5)
-Phade
www.Phade.tk
Upbeat
Well it's rare to see me a review a Dance track but I must say that this track is real upbeat and it's definitely a good track. Stay up.
thanks DEX! its good to see your Review a dance track! thanks for the good words and the vote bro! :)
Incredible...
N***as need to stop sleeping on you cause you just blew me away. I'm a lyrics whore and I always pay attention to that the most unless the flow is completely bad but this has a nice flow to it and on top of that *drum roll* Lyrics with a message! Yes, this song is so unique and it shows everyone how real hip-hop should look like and the guitar solo was just sexy as hell. This is getting my 5 and a download. Stay up.
~ Ya boy DeX
Hell yeah brother, i can dig it. Preciate the listen, like, an ACTUAL listen, instead of like the guy above you. Feedback is always welcome.
Keep it Grounds,
TheDeadman69
Unique
Lyrically, both of ya'll came hot on this track, I loved it. I think both you your flows were pretty good on this one but it threw me off a couple of times but I can't blame you guys for that, this beat is real glitchy so it's iffy. By the way, I fucking loved the Japanese dialogue and singing as the outro, this is definitely something unique so just for being creative, it's becoming a favorite ;) Hey by the way, did you take that Japanese singing as an acapella or is this beat a part of the song with the singing? Just curious.
glad you liked it
and the dialouge didnt come with it but the singing did. But it all comes from the same source "07-Ghost" really good show.
Deep
I love story-telling tracks. This shit sounds much better than your past tracks man, your delivery and flow sound much better as well. This track is real good, stay up.
Ya man, there's something I love about story telling tracks as well. This is my third attempt at one, and probably my only decent one haha. Glad you enjoyed it man.
Good talent
Damn, for being 15 I think both of ya'll have plenty of talent to spare. My biggest complaint would have to be your mic, well I know ya'll are young but when you get enough money, ya'll need to get yourself a nice USB Condenser mic of some sort. The guy on the second verse (SOS I think) should work on his lyrics a little more, they were too simple for my taste overall. I have nothing against simple lyrics but as long as the message is strong enough, like Tyler. Tyler's second verse was tight, I enjoyed that. Now the singing, the singing was done real well and it would have sounded so much better with a better mic. I think I really enjoyed this track cause it has a chill and old school vibe to it. The beat was well produced as well and the overall track was great, just invest in a better mic and ya'll are set. Stay up.
~ Ya boy, DeX
Thx For The Honest Review :D
Actually Tyler Rapped On The Whole Song I Only Produced The Beat And Helped Him Record With My Mic.I Know My Mic Is Garbage lol (Rockband 2 mic XD)And Im Making Enough To Buy A 100$ USB Condenser Mic.But Until Then We Are Sticking To The Old Mic.We Want To Stick To Old School Since Most Of The New Music Is Garbage.Thx Though Peace!
Ya'll killed this track
Monk, you had this shit on lock, loved your flow and your verses for this track. Icon was pretty good too, I wasn't too fond of his lyrics but that's just me being picky XD Either way, good job to both of ya'll. Stay up.
Thank you. I put tons of work into this verse. (Not really) lol. And yesh you are very picky haha. Mr Conscience :P
And we thank you greatly. Cant wait to hear your new track :D
I've already be bawled over...
Get it? BaWled over? Well yeah, this track is so fucking sexy. You guys are like the fucking opposite of rehabs...I'm addicted to your tracks. I need some more *scratches neck* I need some more of your music...
It was iight
The only problem I see with your spittin is your flow and delivery dude. You might want to start switching it up a little when you're rapping cause your voice tends to get monotonous. Your lyrics are there, I don't really have a lot of problems with it but I do think that you tried to say too much with this. In my opinion, you should have kept it short and sweet and you would've done better. Nice try though but Mercs track was just simply better. He didn't say too much but he said enough to get a reaction from me. Stay up.
yup, sadly broken needle didn't get the point=(
yes sad puns... but true
This is a sex song
lol, that sample you used just sounded like something you would play right for your girl to get in the mood. This shit is sexy as hell, love it.
lol
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