This shit is tight...
This is definitely something different but since you don't do these club/dance tracks often, I can pick up that you prefer a more rapid pace than this XD It's not so much that your flow was off at a couple of parts but it's more of being more versatile flow since you usually do that non-stop rapid fire flow shit so it's something different for you. Still, I like what you're trying to do but a word of suggestion if you don't mind, try to be more emotional on your delivery cause it feels kind of bland, you gotta hype n***as up with this track (especially on the hook which is catchy if you deliver it better) lol. Still, I'm feeling this track my n***a, keep working on getting big man, I'll definitely be rooting for you and I'll support you any way I can. Stay up.