HeLLsGaUrDiAn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sweat On Me]

Chorus is fire...

That chorus was really good, I don't think I would have thought of that. Your flow is so much smoother since the other times man. The chorus had me bobbing my head. The lyrics though are still kind of random, like try to concentrate on one topic. Like it's all over the place, most of your lyrics tend to stray away from any message, like there are so many ways to say something.

If you pick a topic, you can say something within a metaphor, it's hard to explain but you've heard me and my boy's song, we always stayed on topic with our lyrics. Try that for your next song but this is another step in the right direction, oh and your voice still needs to be toned down at parts. You sound like you're emphasizing every word, so try to emphasize only certain words or syllables. I hope you get what I mean, either way stay up my n***a. 5'd like always.

YoinK responds:

thanks, I really appreciate your suggestions.

[[ f ] Breaking the Silence]

Musical Block...

With this beat I can pretty much tell you did have a block, don't get me wrong this beat is still fire I did like it, I just think you could have came out harder with this. I do notice that you are developing something unique with your beats, it's something within your drums and melodies and it just calls my attention. Keep it up man, stay up my n***a. Oh yeah and 5'd as always ;) gotta support the good artists here ;)

flashmac responds:

Your reviews are alway great man. This man speaks the truth! lol, yeah I could've gone a bit harder but I made this rather quick and couldn't think of anything else to add lol. Thanks for the review.

[Linez vs. Nimbus 2]

My n***a NIMBUS!

Ouch lol I wouldn't want to be in a battle with you son lol. I know I can't write shit this aggressive, I just spit real shit and the sorts. This verse was crazy, I was listening to the lyrics and it was so creatively put together man. I don't know when but I'll hit you up about a collab on a song man. iight stay up my n***a.

NimbusTheGeneral responds:

I agree that it was creatively put together, although I did rush it a little (and I did admit that to Linez, so that's nothing new for people to run back and tell him). I just wish the recording could've been better, but that's what happens when you're trying to record a battle verse and songs for a album at the same time lol.

Good look on the review fam, stay up and do you.

[[ f ] HIgher Up]

Mind Blown...

YESSSS! lol Son this is crazy kid, you don't understand when you came in with those drums and clink sound my head just fell off. This is such a unique beat man, and I really want to use it if I get a chance to write something to this. See now you gonna make it on my favorite artists list :) Alright man, 5 AND Downloaded. iight my little n***a, stay up and keep releasing hot LAVA ( Yeah fire is not hot enough, sorry) lol Stay up.

flashmac responds:

Thanks a lot for the support man. It's much appreciated. Hope you get the chance to write to this

[[S_Rock] Wrong Accusations]

lol wow...

The intro was very deceiving lol, but this beat is hot though maybe I can write something to this. If I can get someone else to do this with me than maybe we can release it, if anything I'll let you know lol, and yes I'm good so you don't have to worry ;) Like I said I'll let you know if anything.

S-Rock responds:

okay!

[- Lost Again -]

Emotional yes...

This beat sounds like you were never gone lol Yeah my n***a, this beat is pure fire man. The title fits very well, "Lost Again" it sure does give me that feeling that something is missing inside me, don't know what it is but this beat kind of opens that feeling up when I listen to it and I think if a beat accomplishes something like that, it's an impressive work of music.

Check me and my boy's song if you have some time man. If we find a topic for this beat, we could spit on it. If we do decide to use it we'll def let you know though. iight my n***a, stay up.

Greeksta-69 responds:

Yeah man... That's how i'm feeling lol

I'll deff check you out man.

Much love.
Greeksta

[Shock And Awe]

Southern but raw...

This shit is fire my n***a, the samples and synths or whatever you call it are fucking crazy my n***a. But the "Hey" voices are so annoying to me. Still 5 though. Stay up.

VtzProductions responds:

Hell Yeah N***a

[Rig & Spawn - 16 Bar Assassin]

Spawn...

That shit is MURDER, my n***a spawn doing it like LAVA son.

Rig responds:

Yo yo fo shizzle, lol

[Mamma Told Me]

This is good my n***a...

I love the message in this song man, it's a deep song and your lyrics were very good. Your flow was pretty good though, like always though there is still room for improvement but everything else was on point my n***a, you got my 5. Stay up.

OBIEakaAO responds:

thanks dude let me know bout that collab

[WS - Zatoichi Tribute]

Fire my n***a...

Yeah, pure fire my n***a. I don't know who Zatoichi is but he must have been some bad ass Japanese n***a. Either way this is crazy son, this is perfect the way it is and has bad ass scratches. Oh and fuck your egg rolls n***a, Papa Johns :) Stay up.

war-spawn responds:

Zatoichi is a freakin legend, a blind yakuza / masseur who's precise with his walking stick which is also his blade. Youtube the n***a, he's hard body son.