This is tight...
You know what, the chorus was catchy and the lyrics weren't bad at all. I liked this, but I'm not into the mainstream sound lol like this sounds real mainstream but there's nothing wrong with that, just as long as you keep the underground mixed in with these type of songs. iight my n***a, stay up.
iight good looks my dude keep voting and stay !
iight iight...
Give credit where it's due, the only thing is stop the whole Nimbut thing, it's mad corny if you feel me and also you gotta give credit to Cajete for the beat my n***a. Either way, I actually enjoyed this and it was well thought out. You had some very good lines in there and I like the way you used your name at the end. We'll just have to wait for Nimbus to respond. Stay up.
UM, IIGHT I GUESS YOU THOUGHT WHINEZO WAS CORNY TOO.ANYWAY GOOD LOOKIN FOR THE RESPONSE.SATY UP.
What's good...
The lyrics are very good for this song, I enjoyed everything but I feel like you're missing some passion or feeling, like it's hard to explain. There is something missing in your voice, maybe it's your mic but either way I liked this song it was tight. Either way stay up my n***a and I'm 5in' it to support, lyrics is on point just work on your voice a little but all in all it's good.
Check me and my boy's song out, real hip-hop my n***a, no mainstream bullshit.
ill check yo shit out
This is tight
I like the how you stayed on topic during the whole song and this is actually an interesting song. The lyrics are great, very sophisticated. The only thing is the effects on the voice might have been a tad overdone, but all and all the song is good. Check me and my boy's song out if you want, real hip-hop and we'll be releasing a new song soon that you should listen to because lyrically, it'll be better than anything out there so just keep an eye out. Stay up.
thanks man, yeah, my voice is a bit overdone but when i remaster it , i'll probably change it, and i'll check your stuff out somtime
Listen...
You need to listen to your own voice man, your flow has improved since your old stuff but you're still not quite there yet. I agree with merc about your lyrics, you need to work on being more creative with them, it just sounds too simple and being more complex can help your flow out at times as well.
By the way, no disrespect here either but merc never said he was the best rapper anywhere, and he certainly wasn't putting you or your guys down. You actually were putting him down which was disrespectful whether you meant it or not. Another thing is that you want some critique and I told you how I felt, just work on your vocabulary, be more creative the way you put your lyrics together. This song is mediocre at best, either way just stay up my n***a, keep working on everything and you'll only get better. 5'd it to keep you up.
thanks for the review ma dude.
this is ejay by the way the second rapper.
how do you think i can improve on my voice?
Def, the winner is...
Flashmac lol but just like everyone said, this one was tough. Both your styles are very unique and that's what makes this one fun lol You know though to be honest, I almost was going to say nik won but then when I heard the last 30 seconds of your beat, I just had to choose yours because of that soft violin in the background or whatever you it was, I know I heard something in the background but it just got me bumping to it again lol. Either way man, you won this one. Congrats.
By the way, if you get a chance check out me and my boys song that I put up on here like years ago but it took the moderators long enough to let it go through. Spread the word and rate it up so I get more people to listen to it.
Thanks a lot man. I appreciate the review. I also checked out your track. It's straight fiyah lol.
Yeah...
You actually have some pretty good lyrics at times but the only problem is that you're rushing some of the bars. If it means cutting down some rhymes so it sounds smoother, you should do it. Just work on making your bars smoother instead of rushed. iight my n***a, stay up.
thank you. ill work on that
Loved the overall vibe like the guy below me said
I loved that hook and that background voice echoin' and singing some words. The funny thing I noticed is that you have that Lil' Wayne flow (Merc), but that's not a bad thing as long as you keep your lyrics real. Ya n***as doing good, stay up.
thx man appreciate to review man yeah i got more of a underground style but when it comes to mainstream beats i get that weezy thing alot man stay bro
You know what?
This is much better than the first in my opinion. I don't produce beats but I write to them, even so I can hear well. Listen, those drums don't sounds weird at all because it hypes the beat more and you come a LOT harder this time around with this beat. When I heard the first one I loved the violin on there but since I've already heard that in the first, you came out swinging on this remastered version, like you in REAL hard with them drums.
Keep doing you kid, stay up.
haha thanks a lot man. It's good to have someone on my side about the drums hahaha.
This sounded familiar for some reason...
Your boy sounded like M(Eminem)...I heard his flow and everything and at times he sounded very similar lol, but you killed it on here...you just have that MG flow, you pretty much attack every song lol Stay up my n***a.
He does have a sound to his voice similar to Em (funny, because he talks almost exactly the same as he raps). I try not to attack every song, mostly because I don't want to come off too aggressive, however if the topic warrants it lol I'm all over it! Appreciated fam.
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