HeLLsGaUrDiAn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[ f ] Hip Hop Beat 11]

This is different lol

I'm feeling this beat and I can still pick up on your style hear lol. It sounds a little more mainstream than your usual stuff but it's all good. Although I do think that maybe that bassline could have used more variation. Stay up man.

flashmac responds:

Yeah your right about the bass. Good to hear from you man

[Break Down(ViralofAME)]

It's ya boy DeX

Hey I'm the other half of Burly and DeX ;) Like my boy said, this shit is real hip hop at it's best and this track is deep my n***as. The hook is tight and I actually disagree with my boy, your flow is on point and it works great for this track BUT I can't say the same for your boy/cousin. He needs to work on his flow a little but he might not, it's hard to say because he kind of has the Immortal Technique type of flow but his lyrics were on point, I was feeling that. What I most respect is both your lyrics my, that shit is what real hip hop should be, it's poetic, metaphorical and real. As a hip-hop artist I can respect this and it's an example of hip-hop at it's best. Stay up my n***as.

ViralofAME responds:

dats wat i been waitin to hear..haha...thanks man..yeah dats my cuz...hes still tryin to perfect his flow and wat not..and he lives in florida were over here in chicago so he doesnt get much time to really practice out here and record wit all of us....and he dont do shit while in florida...lol...its good to see real hip hop heads comin and commentin my shit...lol..ima def check some of ur guys shit...n leave some feed...

[Wyze - Penance]

Much better

Your lyrics have always been your strong point and it looks like the practice is finally paying off for you because your flow is so much better so no all that's left is for you to get a better mic.

Blasphem-E responds:

All right. Thanks for the look out and the words of encouragement along the way Dex. as for the mic, I'm planning on getting some adapters to send my mix through my mixer. Should be better quality then

[2 G's]

Woooh...

Dayum ya'll n***as rocked this fucking beat. IG worked his magic on the hook and he came with pure fire for the verse. Nimbus my n***a, ain't much I gotta say here but you nailed the verse and made a classic song. Stay up.

NimbusTheGeneral responds:

ALWAYS much appreciated Dex. These people just don't know what's about to hit 'em! I got some news imma be posting this weekend, so stay up on it!

Nimbus The General

[Sting - Malevolent Dances]

Woah...

Wyze, where did this beat come from all of a sudden? Those saws or synths or whatever it is were fucking raw as hell. 5 and dl

Blasphem-E responds:

Ya I had a pretty awesome streak for a bit. Some of the great stuff I'm still working on because I want to finish them. Thanks for the review man

[Delinquent 103]

Nice remix...

Honestly I still like the original better but it's really hard to remix a song and make it actually sound better so I give you props for trying. That beat is actually in the works, meaning there will be a song soon and I'll be on it so be sure to check it out when it drops. Back to the beat though, I loved your drum pattern on this though, you made it a little more fast-paced but it keeps the original melody with your twist. All in all, love the beat man, keep it up and keep making tracks. Stay up.

DJ-Delinquent responds:

honestly i still like the original better my self

but the the purpose of this was to go back to my roots i geuss

[Life's Choices]

Another one

The title fits well with the melodies of this song and you've just released another masterpiece lol. Honestly I hope your friends do a good job at making a song out of this because this beat deserves the best. It would be a waste if it were a bad song so good luck to them, as for the beat, 5 and download. iight man, stay up.

C-Enterprise responds:

The first one did something I liked, so I'll have faith in this other one too ;)
Thanks for the five and the review!

[[R.22].Running Thirsty.]

Constructive Criticism from ya boy DeX

I do have a couple of things to say and first off, in my opinion you should really keep the name of your album short and simple, of course it is your album and you can do as you please but in all honesty I think it would sound better as "Nickels and Rhymes," kind of like replacing the original statement of "Nickels and Dimes." I like your passion and the way you really try to get into the song, but you should tone down your flow a little, remember that Hip Hop flows usually don't go up and down but rather emphasize on certain parts of the songs, most of the time being the parts where you begin a rhyme scheme and end it.

What I enjoyed most in this track are the lyrics and I think you have the "Hip Hop state of mind" so-to-speak. I myself as an artist respect what you're trying to do because I'm trying to do the same, show people that Hip Hop ain't just about money, cars and hoes (the occasional violent rap isn't bad, just be creative with the way you express yourself.) Honestly, I don't think you should release your album just yet, be patient. Improve yourself before you make an album, me and my boy Burly have been in the game for about 5 or 6 years now but have yet to release an album (mostly due to the amount of time) but we want to release a couple of tracks here and there before we do so. iight man, keep doing your thing, stay up.

RoobyKillAll responds:

Thanks a lot man. And yeah Nickels and Rhymes would sound good, but I can't get rid of the "Dimes" part for it's double meaning. Dimes being currency and used in drug lingo, which has been a massive part of my surrounding world. Nickels, having the double meaning for a gat or something. Nickel nines, which have turned up a few times in my life also. Nickels, Dimes, and Rhymes.
Yeah this is how I like to rap. I used to do a lot of singing as a kid and I want to start working on more melodic raps. There's too much shit out there that sounds the same and I want to get my own style down pat.

Mad respect for being in the game for that long. But I'm kind of pressured to figure out ways to make money right now since there are very few jobs accessible to me, being a highschool drop out of a failed system. My own fault really. But just freelance tattooing right now isn't enough to keep me comfortable so I figure I can give an album a shot, get some of my boys on the tracks and distribute it locally so I can at least have some peanut butter and jam with my bread. Haha!

But yeah, definitely appreciate you, and everyone else, for dropping real reviews. If I'm actually going to make this work I need real constructive criticism like I've been getting.

Fucking love NG.

[[DX] Ride to Hell]

Same as everyone else...

I like the direction you're going with this, like you tried something really grimey and dark and it does give off that feel but the problem is some of melodies are off. Like they say, practice makes perfect so I'm pretty sure that you'll get the hang of it, you're drums were the strong point on this track so keep improving on that and make sure you get your notes on point. I'm not a producer so I can't say a lot of things in detail but I can tell you tried so just keep working on it, stay up.

dx5231 responds:

thanks man
I should've noticed those notes before releasing the song.. haha

[10th November]

Omg...

I'm sorry, I really do apologize to you in all respects because I have been sleeping on you for such a long time. Your beats are simply gorgeous, I honestly can't find words to describe them, this beat is purely amazing. The strings and the drums are crazy, you've mixed a current generation type melody with old school drum patterns and made this. If I could, I would give more than 5 votes and more than 10 stars but I think I'll have to make a couple of tracks out of your beats. Stay up man, 5'd and downloaded.

C-Enterprise responds:

Thank you very much man ;)
I'll be back with something similar in around a week so.. stay tuned if you liked this piece =)
I'm checkin' your beats anyway ehe
Peace