It was iight
The only problem I see with your spittin is your flow and delivery dude. You might want to start switching it up a little when you're rapping cause your voice tends to get monotonous. Your lyrics are there, I don't really have a lot of problems with it but I do think that you tried to say too much with this. In my opinion, you should have kept it short and sweet and you would've done better. Nice try though but Mercs track was just simply better. He didn't say too much but he said enough to get a reaction from me. Stay up.